写关于汇款问题的英文

1. 写关于汇款问题的英文

分类:  外语/出国 
   问题描述: 
  
 前提： 本公司是一物流公司，有一客户通过我司出口货物到LA。运费的付款方式是：从LA汇款至我司香港帐户。一直以来，我相安无事，从LA汇款后，几天后我们就会收到款但是最近一次不知道怎么搞的，已经汇了两个星期还没收到，后来看了一下客户的汇款单，发现在有两个地方写错了（ADDRESS，SWIFT CODE).所以现在求助各位，帮忙写一封信，我要表达的意思是，叫客户查一下帐户，因为汇了这么久都没收到，钱有可能退回头的。如果退回了，想叫客户重新汇，没的话，叫客户查一下，看看发生什么事。然后回复我们拜托！！
 
   解析: 
  
 (XXXX) \"客户名称\",
 
 We are writing to inform you that it has been over o weeks, and we still have not yet received your payment wire transfer. We re-checked your bank transfer receipt and noticed that the \"address\" and \"swift code\" were incorrectly filled in. We suspect that the transfer was unsuccessful and the fund might have been returned back to your account. Could you kindly confirm with your bank and re-wire the payment to us if the transfer had in fact failed. If not, could you check with your bank and have them investigate if the money had been wired to our account and why it is taking so long for us to receive it. 
 
 Please inform us if you find out any information. We\'d really appreciate it and we look forward to hear from you.
 
  
 
 Thank you,
 
 (XXXX)

2. 中译英：这些汇款已收到，谢谢。但还是有相当一部分没有收到，见下表所列，Invoice见附件

你好这位朋友，感谢你对英语牛人团的信任，我们在此响应你的英语翻译求助。

这句中文的正确、地道英文翻译如下：

These wire transfers have been received. Thank you. However there still exist quite a lot of remaining funds that are yet to be received, which can be found in the table below. Please also refer to the invoice provided in the attachment.

注：
    wire transfer = 汇款，而不是指汇款中钱的数目。我这里选择用wire transfer是因为你原文中写的是“汇款已收到”。如果你想更清楚地写清楚是钱已经收到，可以把开头开成：
    A portion of your total money oweing to us has been received. （您还欠我方的所有款项中，有一部分已经收到。）

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